 Bribbie 2007-07-25 . chapter 2Thst's ok... I was curious... but, that James creeped me out, I like Goofball James, Love-sick James, smart james, Leader James, caring James, Charming James, and I even don't mind horny James, cuz i know he's a dude, and their like that, lol, but that was like creepy sex predetor James, Touch you taste you, feel you, and then he just like well either way it was scary... I always pictures James a lot like the Twins... Sirius and Remus being the other twin as Sirius would be a little nore goofy, and remus a little more serious, ironic no?(sirius serious, in case your like me and didn't catch that right away, lol and i typed it!)
As for the Twins, i haven't read what you talking about, but i think i will, but even so i don't think you should abandon, finish the plot you were working on, tweak to fit DH if need be, but i'd leave it and make an author note that it was written without regards to DH as you started it before DH and such... Don't give up, I LOVE gred and forge (and the marauders minus peter cuz he's a traitorus scum bag, who ended up strangleing himself to death, which was really weird i might add)((as you can see i have a special talent for rambling lol)) |
 quidditch7 2006-04-30 . chapter 1Love it! haha...really, you're a great writer, I can't wait to read more. I'm really intrigued..this looks like a brilliant story, and I hope it's a really long story. The snog scene wasn't bad at all, although it would've been more romantic if he kissed her lips..there was something about how your wrote it that seemed better and more fitting for the circumstances. The quote was from 'Moulan Rouge'(I can't spell, haha), right? Good title, I like it.
Was Lily raped? God I hope not...anyhow, keep up the awesome writing, I can't wait to read more.
-quidditch7 |