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| Watchergirl 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, this was really good. I like how the beginning and ending of Oliver's pov bookend's each other. The way that Duncan and Oliver both are sleeping with Samantha each satisfying a different need while each of them thinks of Sydney was powerful. The idea that Samantha may be lying to them and actively betraying them is an interesting idea. I would add that Samantha besides having the capability to lie to others also is good at lying to herself especially where her feelings about Sydney are involved. I'm a huge Sydney fan so the fact that you made me love this with her only being mentioned obliquely is a rare gift. I'd love to see you write more in this universe. |
| Wiccagirl24 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! I just watched VR for the first time this week, and after the final episode have been haunting up fanfic in some sort of need of closure. This is the first story I've read that folds so seemlesly into canon. You've managed to take the characters, including Sam who we only have a few episodes of infomation and personality for, and make them so alive. Thank you. |
| CD DeLorenzo 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuse1. OMG VR5 fic! 2. OMG with SAM! 3. I love it! I'd love to read more :) |