I like the humor, You've really been taking notes ;) I like the way you've twisted those bits n' pieces from the show. funny.

My TV is tripping out still although it was on last night. Only sound no visual. Thanks for your sympathy.

Actually, it was very funny! I used to like GSR but now it's become canon, I hate it so I found this even funnier! caio

ROFL! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! “Oh, that reminds me, Sara,” Grissom said. “Make sure you stay quiet for the first six and a half minutes after we get there. I want to get my awesome one-liner in before someone turns on The Who really loudly. That always seems to happen.”
That was definately my favorite part. I laughed like super loudly when I read that. And the thing about Catherine and the slow-mo music thing. THAT WAS GREAT!

This would have been funny and not total crap if you weren't such a GSR Nazi...which is kind of ridiculous seeing as it's CANON!

-Just some honest feedback for ya

ROFLMAO! I almost fell off my chair I was laughing so hard! Especially the part where Grissom is assigning everyone the cases and Nick walking off with his poncho...dear Lord, you are going to KILL me! Great job!

“Well, actually, they’re still debating that,” he said. “No matter. Time to go to assignments. Remember, Nick, watch out for those red ants. Bring an exterminator with you. But make sure he doesn’t rifle through your things before knocking you out and leaving you to die from sulfuryl fluoride gas poisoning.”

“Well, I may be a trouble magnet, but, for some inexplicable reason, I’m still alive, after being molested, stalked, held at gunpoint twice, kidnapped, and buried alive.”

Teehee!

I think it's total crap, honestly. I LOVE your other stuff though! Good try.

i now think i know what GSR is.
would you mind explaining??

and i did kinda like this. probably because i actually knew everything that happened in all the episodes you refered to. xP

but it was good.

Ah that was funny. It was pretty impressive how you included so much in so little words.

I see what you ment with out of character... I think it was fun:) you... you said something about a dead Norwegian?? what was that all about?

Heheh. My favourite part is your mention of Grissom getting in his awesome one liner in before The Who are played loudly. His stupid one liners drive me crazy. You had a good point with Grissom and the questionable belief that he is in fact a member of the human race. Sometimes I wonder; he can be so completely insensitive & socially inept. Another point you effectively brought up, haha. I actually like Grissom with Sofia, even though she kind of bugs me. I read a Brass/Sofia fic once... a little off topic, but quite disturbing none the less. Brass made some comment on how beautiful the 'exotic vegetation' was in some nightclub or something. Painful to remember, but nevermind. I got a few chuckles out of this fic- it was different from most parodies somehow, maybe because it was it more blunt in the joking than implying. I did enjoy it though. :)

hihi! me again! remember when i read this on the couch?!? i read it again and laughed totally harder than when i just giggled on the couch! everything makes more sense to me now! it's so funny! good job, chloe!

The whole thing had me cracking up, but I really loved this:
"Greg came out of the DNA lab, which for some reason he was in again, even though he was technically a CSI"
I'm still laughing.

One too many Starbucks green tea blackberry fraps for you!

When I saw your name and GSR I was like WTF? Has she crossed to the dark side? :) This was good - you made fun of everyone, so I don't think anyone will get mad. I liked all the references to supposed gsr moments in the show. I know you hate it...but they're still my second favorite couple, though I'll probably never write about them. Good job!

btw...none of my reviews or author alerts are showing up in my hotmail inbox. I wonder if anyone else is having this prob. I know you always reply, so if you don't...I'll know you're having probs too! ttyl

I LOVE YOU IMMENSELY AND YOU SHOULD BE MADE QUEEN OF EVERYTHING.

-bows down to you-