Thank you SO MUCH for writing this epic, awesome, beautiful, and all things generally complementary, fanfic. It was a great read (I shoved it all in in one day XD Staying up til 5AM nonetheless). I enjoyed it so much, and I was sad when it ended. It ended well, however, and throughout all of the parts I reacted in ways I haven't in a while. Your writing illicited true feelings from me, and I am grateful for the expirience. Kigo all the way! ♥

I have just finished re-reading this series, and I am quite pleased to say that is was just as pleasurable to go through the second time around. Your characterization is spot on, and the focus you put on the character's emotions and motivations is quite welcome. I am also sad to say that I caught your reference in chapter 13. Brave New World by Aldous Huxley and the Alpha caste. Very subtle, and similar events throughout the series definately add to the experience. Thank you for this delightful series.

I have to admit..I was a bit skeptical at first. I'd heard that you were a very talented writer, however, for some reason I just never attempted to read your "An Unnacepted Sitch series" until a few days ago. And let me tell you, I was hooked from the very first page. I don't usually read the entire series of any story on because it can become overwhelming, especially if the story has been finished for quite some time. But I did it! I read the whole thing and can't remember laughing so much. I really enjoyed myself. An unnacptable sitch was written wonderfully ... I just regret not having read some of your work sooner. Just goes to show you can never judge a story by it's cover, right? I hope you'll continue to write more ;-)

Wow. The story was actually finished. you forgot to mark it as complete. You might want to fix that. This was one of the two stories that made me think KiGo was even possible. Before reading this story and the other one that I'm going to search out when I wake up in the morning, I never even considered it, and was a solid Kim/Ron fan. Now however, I rather like this couple. I missed most of the show, which has always bothered me, but eventually I'll play catch up. It was thanks to your story that I actually learned KP was ending. My randomly searching for it resulted in my discovering that little fact. Kinda sad when a show ends. Anyway, your little trick with showing the future like that was rather clever. I like that you show how big the teams are. Kinda sucks that the story is over. Granted, after something that big I don't think it could be topped. I love that Sappho got a body in the end. Even if it's just so she can chase girls. Anyway, now to use this chapter as a sort of review for the entire story. I really like how you made the relationship progress through the stories. It was a slow pace, which just feels "right" for it. You covered a wide range of problems and situations, and even all the important villains that I can think of. In the last story, you even covered Yori, the Lotus Blade, and all the last remaining tidbits you didn't really touch much on in the rest of the story. And then after setting up couples and setting things up for various events, you leave an opening for the future, as well as cover vaguely the ultimate outcome of the storyline you crafted, which was yet another nice touch. I hate to see it end personally, as I'd love to see more, either continuing where this left off, or showing more of that "distant future" as the present instead of "a peak at the world 15 years from now." Anyway, if I don't cut this off I'm gonna end up with a review the length of a story, so I'll stop now. Totally awesome story. Keep up the great work!

TTYL,
Adran

Oh wow. This was not an ending I saw coming. Not at all. I'm most impressed. Having Shego be forced to kill Mrs. Acceptable was a very nice touch. I must congradulate you on on a very well done chapter. I so did not see it coming. Only 2 more chapters to catch up with now. I can hardly wait. Keep up the great work and update soon!

TTYL,
Adran

It's been a very long time since I last read this story, so I decided to finally re-read it then start reviewing some of the newer chapters. I stopped at a rather bad spot as Kim and Shego were just forced into their deathtrap and never saw what happened after that till now. I must say I'm not really SURPRISED they both survived, as that was practically guaranteed to happen, but not in the way it happened. Then with Sappho finally escaped the entirety of Team Possible aside from the Directors and Kim's family are free, which gives them a huge advantage. Things are slowly but surely looking up. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I still have a few more chapters before i go insane though, so lets see what else happens, shall we? Keep up the great work and update soon!

TTYL,
Adran

Thank you... that was a fantastic read.


Wispr

The scene S and SSJ was very touching, you really caught the emotions of the moment.

Wispr

Poor Shego! Very intense chapter.

Wispr

Oh bloody hell that looks bad, very nice fight scene.

Wispr

Good writing with Betty taking out the WEE agents.

Wispr

Have to say this story really is a fantastic piece of writing, thanks for sharing!

Wispr

Nice cliff hanger.

Wispr

You really are keeping me on the edge of my seat... great story!

Wispr

Oh bloody nasty!


Wispr