LOl! This was very fun to read! Everyone's in character and everything! ;D Loved this! ^ ^

-snicker- lol smart roxas xDD so I guess there are quite a few pervs in the organization, huh?

I love the way you characterize the characters. I can imagine everyone doing exactly what they did in the story, in the actual game. xD In full-colour cutscene!

It's really cute. You're a good writer, too. ^^

BEST. ENDING. EVER.

I burst out laughing. That punchline was just so NOT what I was expecting from the rest of the fanfic. Fabulous job!

Omigosh, you know how much PURE genious went into this, don't you? xD
Loved it, every single word.

Oh dude! That was awesome. I busted up laughing at the end :D Great job!

Oh that excellent. LMAO over here. I love how you've managed to keep Axel's tone serious throughout the entire things and just just in one line made us all crack up. Brilliannt punchline!

Oh, great. You (axel) killed Roxas. Now who da HELL are you gonna molest NOW?! Nice work, genius! (wack Axel's head)

LOL. Pwnt. xD

Hoboy. I laughed pretty hard at that one.

I loved the choice of words. "Family meeting", or "physical activities".

Yeah, sure Axel, going out to get hearts for Kingdom Hearts.
Heheh.

xD

I am crying with laughter right here. Oh my, this was AWESOME! I love it!

Crap, there go brain cells... Ho hum.

Very enjoyable.

What the heck does that mean!
Nice Ending!

AH HAHAHA!! I loved this!! Very nicely written, oh and the Akuroku *hearts*

Haha I actually like Saix in this. Well done ^^

...O...M...G...Roxastoldeveryoneabouthimandaxelandgotkilled XD awesomeness to the max!