Rofl, I read this in LJ, I didn't know you were the author. XD Before I saw the story though, I caught a glimse of the comments and someone mentioned Dead!Al, so I thought that meant Edward was only imagining Alphonse and THAT was too painful/angsty to handle so I pretened he was a ghost to bat off tears. The ending KILLED me, and it so fluffy and tragic at the same time. XD This is one of my favorite stories you've ever written. D ZOMG

That ending was unexpected and sad, down right depressing but still very good.

This was amazing. The ending was so good yet it gave me chills. Keep up the amazing work!

Holy crap, the ending is so... surprising. Unexpected, that's the word, scared the hell out of me, had to read it twice. Everything falls so nicely into place now, that was such a nice story.

omg, omg, where to begin. beautiful writing, and wonderful ending. u have done an outstanding job. The hints are cleverly hidden, i love it.

that was cute. Your a really good writer.

And this is why I love you. SO. Very. Very. Much. *huggles and drags you into closet*

I've decided that you need to quit writing one-shots and start developing this idea. It's hot and sexy and interesting and I love Smoker!Ed.

And it just occurred to me that Ed might be buying flowers for Al's grave. Is he? Or is this another "Ahaha! I'm leaving it open for interpretation because I don't feel like being definitive!" moment?

Damn you, Smoker!Ed is hot.

O, I knew it was going to be something like that, all those little hints you dropped and in the end, I started crying. Really good and really sweet!

omg...that was so...beautiful...excellent work veyr much indeed

Wow, that was cool. I really liked the story and the last line, so cute.

AW zomg.. that was so sad... You almost made me almost think I was going to cry (which is pretty good, considering who we're talking about)

The beginning reminded me of Tuck Everlasting for some reason. So did the end...

That was great ;_; I heart... muchly.

-save-

aw, its beautiful, romantic...just great :'))

i really like ur writing style, really...

oh...is it a oneshot or no?

im not sure...lol