Reviews for Checkmate
Kataryanna 5/20/13 . chapter 50
aghioahetaglknat;geogiha;woheoagn;aoli! OMG! So much crap! Poor Danny! I wonder what happens when Vlad says 'Dazzler' in conversation and Danny flips out! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I thought maybe Danny would just be missing for awhile and Jazz and Sam and Tuck would have to help Vlad, but oh this is...is...I don't know! Thank you for the wonderful story! I hope you update your sequel soon. I mean I am far from finishing this, but I hope you didn't just stop writing it. I love this! My only critique is that you use the word "waste" quite a lot. I would be satisfied with simply kill, destroy, or maim, but ah well. Enough of my Rambling!
BellaPhantom 5/19/13 . chapter 44
*smiles as you FINALLY bring Ember, who is like a sister to her, into the story* After mentioning her name so many times, you FINALLY brought Ember into the story. My name is actually Amber, so you see how she's like a sister to me. *becomes hypnotized as she hears Ember's song play on her TV**unknowingly begins to sing along* AHH! Snap out of it, Amber! *smacks herself to near unconsciousness* Ow. That was stupid of me!
BellaPhantom 5/19/13 . chapter 43
*pants as she startles herself by seeing her hazel eyes flash a slightly brighter shade of green than normal for a fraction of a second* I must be going crazy. *suddenly feels a random hot feeling coursing through her body even though it is fairly cool in her room at the moment* I need to go lie down.
BellaPhantom 5/19/13 . chapter 41
*pants between her words* Now, more than ever, I feel Danny's pain, especially when Danny was shot with the arrows in his back. *rubs her sore back* I'm still feeling that pain. *pants heavily as she realizes that she's weaker than she thought* I need to rest. *collapses on her bed while fighting to stay awake*
BellaPhantom 5/19/13 . chapter 38
*growls as she tackles a life-like Vlad doll for being such a twisted, crazed-up fruitloop* I'LL KILL YOU, PLASMIUS! MARK MY WORDS, I WILL KILL YOU IF I EVER Y HANDS ON YOU!
BellaPhantom 5/19/13 . chapter 36
*smacks the Vlad piñata again, but harder this time* That's for forcing Danny to stay at your castle! *turns and just glares at Danny* How could you, Danny? How could you be so mean to your own sister? You sounded just like your evil self when yelling at your friends! Be careful, Danny, or you'll turn into him. *turns and walks away from Danny without a second glance*
BellaPhantom 5/19/13 . chapter 35
*whacks the Vlad piñata with a huge grin on her face as she smacks Vlad in the face* You deserved it, you seriously crazed-up fruitloop!
BellaPhantom 5/18/13 . chapter 20
I can feel what Danny feels, see what he sees. And during that battle with Vlad, I felt as though I were unleashing the Ghostly Wail as well, because my throat is now very sore and I felt considerably weaker and out of breath as well.
BellaPhantom 5/17/13 . chapter 11
*clenches her fists as her hazel eyes flash a bright green for a fraction of a second* HOW COULD THAT CRAZED-UP FRUITLOOP DO THIS TO POOR DANNY! *quickly calms down before she realizes that she almost unleashed her version of a Ghostly Wail out of pure anger at Plasmius*
BellsPhantom 5/17/13 . chapter 8
I AM SO CLOSE TO RELEASING MY OWN VERSION OF A GHOSTLY WAIL ON THAT CRAZED-UP FRUITLOOP'S ASS! Pardon my language but he is just a HUGE pain in my ass! I wouldn't even need ghost powers to take him out! I would just use my anger and channel it into my fists and BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF VLAD!
BellaPhantom 5/17/13 . chapter 6
*laughs softly between her words* Ok, I was laughing so hard when I read your little Box Ghost quote! I was like, "Really? You just had to throw that in there, didn't you?" Man, I laughed even at my own comment!
Kataryanna 5/17/13 . chapter 47
This chapter was fantastic! It wasnt too long or short, and the humor was wonderful! I love the all the teasing and getting along! Yay!
Natildaphantom 5/14/13 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! This was my very first DP fanfic I ever read EVER! I read this when I was 9! I'm 12 now and I'm reading it again I love it! Best fanfic I ever read! Awsome details, great description, great diolouge! OMG I almost cried when it was over! I love it sooooooo much keep up the awesomeness
Light008 5/6/13 . chapter 85
I just finished reading this and all I can say it wow, that was one heck of an emotional roller coaster. I can't describe how amazing this fic is and really can't wait to read pretty much everything else you've wrote. I love how you portray the characters and think you've linked season 2 and three perfectly. Keep up the amazing work!
samisabitch 4/28/13 . chapter 83
Sam is a resentful bitch
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