hmm.. kind of short lived but was decent to say the least :)

though i think you could have made this a once shot instead of putting it into two different chapters. ^^

oh, aww! T-T wah!! x.X; that. is. so. SAD!! my eyes hurt now. eek! ahsjgkla. i hate sad stories, yet, i loove them!! XD teehee. i'm weiird. ehh, favourite time!! -adds- X3 yay!

augh, you made her die. and you made him sad. TRAGEDY STRIKES!! -stabs-

arrgh! thanks so much for writing this story!! XD teehee. i LOVED it!! XDD teehee.

lovelovelove!

-hopelessmine!!

Wow, very sweet. Lovely, descriptive style, like poetry. I like the names especially. ^^