aw, sweet. A nice way to wrap it up

For me, this was the most depressing chapter in the manga. I mean, yeah, it was kind of sad when Kikyo finally died again, but that was more of a solemn relief. When Kagura died, it just left you feeling empty. I like the way you told it, though. Very nice!

By the by, that line at the beginning, about Emily...that's from a Simon and Garfunkel song, isn't it?

Very very good in expanding on the manga. Thank you. I enjoyed reading it.

This was beautiful. I love wonderful Sess/Kagura fanfics!!

beautiful but sad. write more!

Oh. Wow. I'm crying. Woah, this was so good! It was sad but it was also fitting. I'm glad you had her smile at the end and that she turned into wind. If you were ever to make this a two shot you could have Shessy tell Rin the story of Kagura. ^__^

Aw ...

Dammit, you made me cry. :( Plus I'm listening to some REALLY sad music ...

POOR KAGURA!

*cries even more*

That was beautiful.

Okay. I'm not personally a Sesshomaru Kagura fan, but this is so good! I love it! It is undoubtablely (sp?) the best Kagura dying fic ever! It's so much better than the original scene!! Wow, Great job!

*sniff* I almost cry aloud at this beautiful fanfic!! How i wish i could write like that! Aw... It's so sweet, yet tragic. I am going to put this as one of my fav stories!

Aw, very emotional. I have no idea about the characters, but I don't think you could have crammed any more emotion into it.

For your next edit I think there's a 'floor' in there that should have been a 'ground' or something similar, since she's in a field. Floor always implies manmade to me.

Congrats on all the reviews. :)

Wow that was moving. I've never read a sess/kagura fic before. It was sad, but very well written the descriptions were phenomonal.

Aww, that's so sad and sweet. i think I'm gonna cry. and it was so true to the character's personalities. you managed to write it so that i could see it all being played out before me like a movie. Keep wtieing stuff like this it's so hard to find the fics that are written by the people who are really good. 'cause man, i am such an awful writer compared to you.

Winterhart

Love it, it was great, a new twist, a new tale.

She deserved a death as this, no more hating, no more killing, no ones puppit she will be any more. I like new stories, and even one as not as a Sess/Kag. Your writing's are good as I love to read them. Again great job, keep up the great stories, will be looking for more, I love to read, and only till I had come to this place. So smile, have fun, enjoy your self, and make people happy, as you did me.

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aw even though i don't like Kagura Sesshoumaru pairings that was very sweet and sad i liked it