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shushumomo
2009-12-01 . chapter 2
I really enjoyed the story so far, there were some moments when I laughed very loud. You are funny and entertaining. Thank you.
Anonymous
2009-11-11 . chapter 26
Really great. Best I have read on this site. A good story from start to finish. Plot, characters and character development was really outstanding, worthy of a published novel.
For the sake of giving a little criticism: Some details might have been different, some dialogue was a little unclear, I felt the character ryuusuke was superflous and intruding, I would have liked it even better if it was a little closer to an M rating, some parts might have been fleshed out a little, more descriptions, the voice in Sachiko's head was perhaps used a little too much, but these are all minor points.
Yoham
2009-11-03 . chapter 26
Thank YOU, Vega62a for 26 chapters of an amazing Marimite-Fanfic! It's definitely a fav! Your writing/story got under my skin and to say that I'm happy that I came across it, is putting it mildly.
For those of you, who check the reviews before reading a fic I only have to say one thing: don't hesitate, read it!
Thank you for sharing and take care!
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 26
I didn't comment on the last few chapters, or some of the first few I'm sure, and I apologize for that. It's just that I got so caught up in the flow of the story that I kind of forgot to pause and write a review. Then again, I suppose that you don't always need to reply to every little thing and sometimes, there just really isn't much of anything that you can say to certain things.

Great fic all around, it's gonna stay a personal favorite of mine for a long time I hope.
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 15
Well damn...
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 13
How very cute. ^_^
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 12
Funny, that sounds like something me and my friends might do.

Yumi is a short little thing, isn't she?
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 11
Doh! *Slaps forehead*

Hoo boy, Sachiko has a very interesting problem. Now if only we could that voice/her mother to kindly shut the hell up and go strait to the ninth level of hell we might be able to help her.

*Glances over at the shellshocked Sachiko and says cheerfully* Hormones finally catching up to you there, kiddo? ^^ About damn time too.
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 10
Sachiko's mind is a weird place to be.
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 9
For some odd reason the phrase 'God save the Queen!' comes to mind... Hm?... I love what you've done with this whole fic, it's infuriating, it's hilarious, it's confounding, and yet so simple. The way you've portrayed the characters makes them adorable and down right MADDENING!... I like it very much! Well done.
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 8
Hahahaha! Oh, dear lord. How many of us have had to double up in a small car before and how many times have we done it since? Try fitting nine people in a car that at best is only supposed to fit five and at most seven. It's a scarily hilarious thing to experience, especially when someone's screaming "Ohmygod, COPS!" in your ear while one person is lying across four different laps, including yours, in the back and another is sitting between the passenger's side person's legs up front. We were on the ground laughing and crying all at once when we finally FELL out of the car later!
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 4
""These are my friends, you **. How dare you?""
I nearly busted a gut laughing at that line!
Virgoincarnate
2009-10-14 . chapter 3
I find it almost hilarious how that little voice in Sachiko's head tells her how to deal with one's husband while she's on the phone with Yumi.
Slyfox00
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
I do not have the words. Thank you so much for writing.
Skya
2009-09-18 . chapter 26
One of the best around that I've read for these pairings. Admittedly, some parts were rather confusing for me due to the mix of thoughts and dialogue, but I enjoyed it. The characters are cleverly crafted with their personalities and way of thinking and very "them". Cheers for a story well made! Thank you.
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