holy shit! that was awesome, i love both stories!!

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I believe I have said all that can be said, your work is nothing less than intriguing, intelligent, well thought out, and most of all entertaining. What more could be said. PEACE!

great story! I like the ending. Very nice, I always find endings hard to write. It was a wonderful read.

continue with story please. (I read fast I'm not sure why)

You had me worried there. Towards the end I was sitting with my fingers crossed that Reava would live. Those are some close calls. Phew.

Now, she's taken on bugs, hunters, and humans. Bring on motherhood. This could get interesting.

Liked the new chapters.

Liked the new chapters.

Go Reava & Co.

Skinning someone alive is one of my favorite gory deaths. And Darian deserved every second of it. Gr.

This is an awesome story, you have done well.

You know, I really hate this Darian now. Playing puppetmaster to a bunch of Xenos is bad enough. Using a pregnant woman against her will, that is just plain dispicable.

Awesome chapters. I love this story with its originality and plot twists. Very creative, keep up the good work.

Liked the new chapters.

Nice story, update please, and if you want you can check out my story half me half you, by me

Great story.

Happy B-day my fellow Taurian.

I love this story, Reava is such an awesome character. I loved the betting on the mate thing. And I have a sneaking suspicion on exactly what the "bitch with the button" found during her examination.

I guess I missed some chapters or something. This story has turned out really well. Nicely done.