  FAT DUDE 2007-06-28 . chapter 1 cool |
  DarkLight's Pen 2007-04-14 . chapter 1Nice format. The "i squeeze" part just seems so powerful. Bravo.
Delta, Zulu |
| Talistair 2006-09-12 . chapter 1 Hey dood I got the book but its not like that.Anyway nice short story |
| 3rdeye 2006-06-28 . chapter 1 Excellent storry! It makes me almost wonder if I should some stories specalising on certain troops! But I should leave that to the professionals really shouldnt I? |
| keegan 2006-06-06 . chapter 1 it was good but you need more
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 TwinBladeWarrior 2006-06-05 . chapter 1Book?
"one shot, one kill" is a random line said by a sniper in star wars: battlefront 2
I may have to look for this book though |
| LT L 2006-06-04 . chapter 1 U copied 1 shot 1 kill the book. But keep up the good work! |
| Teh Healist 2006-05-02 . chapter 1 Short... but good. I think it was a clever idea, although it was indeed simple. What I really like is that you have really good grammar. MAJOR turn-on for me 'n other readers, let me tell you. Next time, you might want to add a bit of length and a slightly more complex plot, but this was really good practice.
Keep up the good work,
Healie |
| Negatronic 2006-05-02 . chapter 1 Nice , man . |
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