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| Dione Robertson 2006-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseSEXY! loved the reason River had for Jayne not kissing "them" (sign) on the mouth. I disagree with River. pretty sure that Jayne is hard just about now like. Will he have to wait long? |
| Ellisguy 2006-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseI think you captured much of River's spirit in this story. It was a very calculated move she made on Jayne, knowing that he would over-exert himself and be in a compromising situation. I like how you have River knowing what she can get away with and for how long. I also like how this leaves Jayne completely powerless and frustrated in her presence. I've seen you do others like these, so I'm hoping that you may sew them together in some way. |
| Dina C. 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseWooHoo, River! Keep him guessing, girl. :) Do we get more Rayne goodness,or is this the end? |
| Dude Wheres My Cheese 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abusetsk tsk, that River is a naughty girl! Hehehe, nothing amuses me more than an uncomfortable Jayne! Nice! |