Nice. :3 You had a good start for the plot of the story. It's interesting. Hmm...I wonder what will happen to Jounouchi...

Ah, what a good chapter! :D I like the setting and Jounouchi's inner turmoil. Hehe, it's all good. That doctor was too...friendly with him though. Me no likey! Away, evil doctor! Away I say!
Anyhow, a good chapter and it's nice to see the world Jou lives in. Good descriptions and all! Heheh, and was Kaiba being jealous or just possessive? :P Bwahahaha! I can sense obsession growing. ^_^
Anyhow, I'll forgive you for your late update if you update faster this time. Mwoahaha! ...Hm? Say what? You don't care about my forgiveness? Why, the rudeness of you! *waits patiently for update anyhow*

good chapter.
please don't take 2 long to update

Wow, wow. This is all so interesting. What's all the talk about empires and secret businesses? You shouldn't have stopped here, because you've made all your readers cry probably...

I know I am! I'm dying to read the next chapter. DYING HERE! And hopefully there will be more secrets to reveal... And other relations...

Look, just please do something before I end up doing something idiotic, which may includes a penny, 2 gum wrappers, and a lot of paper clips... Sorry about the meaningless threat, BUT keep up the excellent work nonetheless!

yes! another well done chapter! keep writing and i'll be sure to keep reading! ^^

*the suspense X.X *

*siffles* It took so long... but it was wonderful, so you're forgiven! ^_^ Cookies and pocky for you! Update soon for yamyams!

oh! this is awesome! what is going to happen! i can't contian to excitment! really! i want to know who and why and what empire! the empire strikes back? i don't know! *cries* TELL ME! ... anyways, i have to leave soon so i'll make this quick. this chapter was really cool. i love how you write. it really... makes me believe in the characters. i can't help but feel like a i love this story to pieces already! and have been reading it for ever and am already emotionally attached. you really are a wonderful author! i can't even think right now! this was mind blowing. makes me want to imporve as a write, now that i see how go people can become!... though there are some others that top you... sorry, but JRR Toklin is still the best. ^_^' sorry! i do really love this though! you really know what you're doing. or something, because i really want to know what is going to happen and i want to know now! please! update asap! i have to go, but i'll review you later^_^

ooh! i wonder who it was...yami? or some other person...poor joey *hugs* update soon PLEASE!

I wonder who the hell that was? Out of curiousity, why did Kaiba break the glass?

this is rally cute and I hope you up date soon.can't wait to find out who it is!
fiby

This is great. Update soon

ja

Beautiful write. I am enjoying the flow and personalities of each character. I'll be waiting for the next bit of excitement!

=o

Hope U update soon, No QA's, sorry...