IT COULDN'T BE A ONE-SHOT. T_T WHY?
I REALLY LIKE IT, U HAD A GREAT IMAGINATION AND ITS 1 OF THE MOST IMPORTANT THINGS 2 BECOME INTO A REAL ARTIST.

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Aww! That's so awesome. I liked it, because while she was rambling on about her thoughts, it really seemed like she wasn't interested in James. That's a good thing, because I honestly don't think Lily had some hot burning passion for him the way most Lily/James fics make her. So anyway, now I'M done rambling, and all I have to say is good job.

aww. that was really cute. i wish u'd continue it though. just think about it cuz it could turn into a really kool story. well anyway i liked it a lot. lylas.

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That was a perfect last line.

it is cute but u should have added a bit more