This is the cutest little thing, and I think you've got Ivan's voice down pat, so no worries! Seriously, though, this fic is adorable and filled me with a warm glow. Especially the Isaac/Ivan parts~ It's my favorite pairing in the game, sadly, there's not a lot of fic for it...thanks for making my little shipper heart happy ♥

You portrayed Ivan very well
It's been awhile since I played Golden Sun, but I enjoyed the fanfiction nonetheless.

I'll review more of your stories if you review more of mine!

C.C: Everyone

P.S: Isaac/Ivan is one of my favorite pairings. YAY! Good luck with your stories.

FJA out!

I personally think you did a wonderful job on this! =D Yes, Ivan does need hugs. *hugs Ivan* I love the way this was written (better than what I would've done, which would have destroyed the story) and your voice was great. ^_^ I'm sortof a novice at writing, so my comment might not mean as much, but your story was so good, I had to comment.

Great job, and good luck with other stories you may write!