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Wen1 2007-04-09 . chapter 4
excellent, really good descriptions, that's a good fic ;)
Wen1 2007-04-09 . chapter 3
lololol
excellent
Wen1 2007-04-09 . chapter 2
hihihi that's funny
Bsquared19 2007-01-11 . chapter 5
I just read this!

Wonderful story! I can totally see most of that happening. (Except the part where Booth hits her, even drunk and out of control I don't think he would, but who knows.)
JadedOne47 2007-01-02 . chapter 5
I don't know what you're talking about, you're a great writer, and trust me, I read more fanfic than i'm sure is good for me. YOu do a fab job. Keep it up. Though, i'd love to know what happened next.
WhisperingLeaves 2006-11-30 . chapter 5
Gosh, I haven't been to this site in a long time, and I haven't written a fanfic since 7th grade I think, and since I'm now in 12th, it's been a while! After reading your story, I feel like I need to share a few of my stories as well.

I love this story, you had the formula quite correct. I liked how you mixed the right amount of fluff, while still staying true to the personalities of the pair.

All I have to say is B squared baby! lol

~*Candice*~
willowwood 2006-06-29 . chapter 5
Loved It.
noitcifnaf 2006-06-06 . chapter 5
oh, this is just BEGGING for a sequel, what happens directly after this? i really like your style of writing,good job
Aemie 2006-06-05 . chapter 5
and one, two, three... "Aw!"
lol, that was lovely, congrats on a grweat story!!
lemmingduck 2006-06-05 . chapter 1
I really liked this story.. It was deep and moving. I hope you write more.
lemmingduck 2006-06-05 . chapter 5
I liked it alot. I thought all the disclaimers were hilarious about the library and banana republic.
mendenbar 2006-06-05 . chapter 5
I can picture Booth as a happy drunk. What a sight! Anywho, I liked your story a lot. Keep up the work.
avaleighfitzgerald 2006-06-05 . chapter 5
loved htat! great conclusion there.
Ava
siapom 2006-06-05 . chapter 5
That was so sweet! Thank you for sharing this story with us. :-)
Maeve Bran 2006-06-05 . chapter 5
Ah ADD, I understand for I have ADHD.

I loved this story. Perfect ending. You captured Booth very well. That is the way i think he would be if he were drunk. Great job!
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