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Wen1
2007-04-09
ch 4,
abuseexcellent, really good descriptions, that's a good fic ;)
Wen1
2007-04-09
ch 3,
abuselololol
excellent
Wen1
2007-04-09
ch 2,
abusehihihi that's funny
Bsquared19
2007-01-11
ch 5,
abuseI just read this!

Wonderful story! I can totally see most of that happening. (Except the part where Booth hits her, even drunk and out of control I don't think he would, but who knows.)
JadedOne47
2007-01-02
ch 5,
abuseI don't know what you're talking about, you're a great writer, and trust me, I read more fanfic than i'm sure is good for me. YOu do a fab job. Keep it up. Though, i'd love to know what happened next.
WhisperingLeaves
2006-11-30
ch 5,
abuseGosh, I haven't been to this site in a long time, and I haven't written a fanfic since 7th grade I think, and since I'm now in 12th, it's been a while! After reading your story, I feel like I need to share a few of my stories as well.

I love this story, you had the formula quite correct. I liked how you mixed the right amount of fluff, while still staying true to the personalities of the pair.

All I have to say is B squared baby! lol

~*Candice*~
willowwood
2006-06-29
ch 5,
abuseLoved It.
noitcifnaf
2006-06-06
ch 5,
abuseoh, this is just BEGGING for a sequel, what happens directly after this? i really like your style of writing,good job
Aemie
2006-06-05
ch 5,
abuseand one, two, three... "Aw!"
lol, that was lovely, congrats on a grweat story!!
lemmingduck
2006-06-05
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this story.. It was deep and moving. I hope you write more.
lemmingduck
2006-06-05
ch 5,
abuseI liked it alot. I thought all the disclaimers were hilarious about the library and banana republic.
mendenbar
2006-06-05
ch 5,
abuseI can picture Booth as a happy drunk. What a sight! Anywho, I liked your story a lot. Keep up the work.
avaleighfitzgerald
2006-06-05
ch 5,
abuseloved htat! great conclusion there.
Ava
siapom
2006-06-05
ch 5,
abuseThat was so sweet! Thank you for sharing this story with us. :-)
Maeve Bran
2006-06-05
ch 5,
abuseAh ADD, I understand for I have ADHD.

I loved this story. Perfect ending. You captured Booth very well. That is the way i think he would be if he were drunk. Great job!
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