it's great.

That's the second time, you know. This story is the second time one of your stories has made me cry. It's just...the way they're written catches you off guard. No, not even off guard. They slice through your guard, catch you where your vulnerable. This one especially. When Harry was revealed to be a portrait, you know, I just burst into tears. And I wasn't expecting to! It's just...I don't know, it just caught me.

That was amazing and emotional. If I wasn't so used to sad stories I imagine I'd be in tears by now! But knowing me, I have this sick fascination with sad stories, only because I believe that not everything has a happy ending.

I feel bad for poor Hermione. At the same time I can absolutely understand her self-hatred about what happened. I believe that, from the line Hermione spoke about finally finding the spell that could have helped in the end, Hermione was probably obsessive over the event since it ever happened?

All in all though, an excellent one-shot! This truly lives up to the all the hype I heard about it from a friend. I applaud you.

You didn’t have to make me kill you!

That's harsh.

You threw me off there for a minute. When I read the summary, I figured Hermione would be talking to Harry's grave. Then when he talked back I thought he was alive - then we found out that it was just a portrait. That's a good thing, by the way. Brilliant story, I love it.

Why'd you have to make me cry?

Oh my...harry dying is one thing, making hermione kill harry is...so sad...so cruel...yet so amazing. Short, poignant, powerful. Great job.

OMG! THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY. IT WAS A COMPLETE TWIST RIGHT UP TO THE VERY LAST PARAGRAPH. I LOVED IT! EXCELLENT JOB!

i have read all of your stories (including your husband's>Great story by the way>) and i have to say that this one is my favourite one. even though i am a devoted harry/hermione fan i think that that is whats going to happen at the end of the seventh book(tears)this was a great/sad story!!

WOW Im totally impressed! I mean what a twist. It was so awesome was not expecting that ending! That was an insanely cool story it was so sad but it was perfect!

wow...this story is absolutly amazing! I love it and I cant wait to read more of your work.

Hey good story that was a surprise Harry being a picture awesome story!

i don't think this story is too dark. it's very well written and very misleading i had no idea harry was a portrait good work. well done

o i loved it!

I honestly think that was one of the best pieces of literature on this site that I have read so far. So tragic, yet so believable. With your abilty to portray such vivid emotions, and your talent for fully exposing true feelings on a darker scale I think you are true author with great potential.