Yeah..not as good as the first...from what the summary says originality is good but how you're going about it isn't very original such as you're 'rewriting' the anime instead of actually creating a fic based off of it. Dunno if that's what you're trying to go for but its just my opinion. Overall, Keep writing. Ja! \m/ ^.^ \m/

I realy like the way this story is turning out and I hope that you continue it. I am always interested in stories about narutos' childhood and I rarely see one where kakashi is the one to get him. Looking forward to the rest.

Hey Carol. Pretty good start though I know you can do ten times as better. At least you have originality other than the plot repeats these noob writers are creating these days. Lol...we'll be narutards for as long as we can remember. (T.T can't believe I got sucked into the Naru craze...) Keep writing and I'll probably draw a scene (you can even ask for a scene you want) from your fic and post it on my DeviantArt. Be vivid and creative! Read others fic and make sure you're not writing something similar to what they might be writing (aka plot repeaters). See ya l8er...and if you probably have no clue who this is...its the one who always falls asleep in your fourth period.

hey. i'll write a longer review later cuz there's a jorri over my shoulder epidemic. great story!

It Was Awsome PLEASE CONTINUE

I am reviewing! Finish it please!

GO MISS SILVER HUNTER! I mean Se-Isis, ya, It's me, you red haired best friens's sister! I love this story. It's so cute! *Happy Dance* Miss Red Bandet will talk to you later I perzum.

Good story! Please continue!

This story makes me wish that it wasn't just a one-shot... I love it!

Sorry, too lazy to log in. Ha ha! Anyway, I liked it a lot! But, even when it's plural, it's ninja. Not ninjas. Don't worry, a lot of people don't know that! Anyway, really liked it!