Ouch, now that's what I call angst. Poor Shep, I don't know whether to give him a hug or slap him up side his head.

Oh dear, poor Shep! He's a little dense - well he is a man. Lol! Very nicely written, as usual.

more please

Oh, that was wonderful! I'm skeptical to read your stuff now, cause sometimes, they are so sad! but this was good...OH, I WISH I COULD JUST SLAP HIM FOR TEYLA!

oh... not so bad at all... nor a dramatically angsty as some... nice.

NO!...Sheppard is so dense!...urgh men. Don't know how you can improve it's pretty good. That is if you do plan to continue. I'd really like to see how he atones for this. So um..think Teyla or any one else will ever accidentally stumble upon this book?