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Reviews For: Separate Souls
Raine 2006-09-23 . chapter 3
Damn, girl! Are these really the first poems you've written, cause you have some serious talent. Who cares about the right formatting, your poems are kick*!
GangsterGurl and Bloody Nikki 2006-08-14 . chapter 3
You have a great artistic sense for peotry. I lued all your poems but the Looking Glass was my favorite!
My Soul Your Puppet 2006-07-01 . chapter 3
o, that was awesome! lol. :) well great job on all your poems and be sure and write more, kk? Later! ;)
oxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
puppet-chan
My Soul Your Puppet 2006-07-01 . chapter 2
good job! even if if seemed a tad bit ooc it was great!:)
oxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
puppet-chan
My Soul Your Puppet 2006-07-01 . chapter 1
your first time? well good job! I liked this piece a lot. :) the words speak the truth in ways. well keep up the good job.
oxoxoxoxoxoxox
puppet-chan
SnowAngelYuki 2006-06-30 . chapter 3
yay!
another poem!
too bad dis didn't ryme
Dark Angel Shadow 2006-05-21 . chapter 2
These poems are totally awsome PLEASE keep writing more!
SnowAngelYuki 2006-05-01 . chapter 2
I noe it is totally out of character 4 Kanna to say anything but dis poem rocks!
(I like the first one more though ._.)
SnowAngelYuki 2006-05-01 . chapter 1
GREAT STORY!
err... poem!
I could never make it ryme and get it to make sense at the same time
(but that doens't mean my poems are bad meanie! >.
ReviewerWriter 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
That was such a wonderful poem! It was great that you showed the sisterly bond they held so well. Thank you for writing this great piece. I am so glad I got the chance to read this great fic.

:-)
artemisxmoon 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
oh my these poems are beautiful, i really wish in the anime they'd show how good of friends they are more, i wish i had a friend like that

HURRAH! it was awesum truly
Cyrox 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
Very good, personally, I think Kagome and Sango were in character. I also like the fact that you didn't use any dumb cliches: like Kagome feeling suicidal, or another anime boy appears and Kagome randomly falls in love with him.
Keep up the good work.
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