i dont no y but when i read the bit were klaus asks duncan to play cards ... i picture duncan in a hole crossin his arms ? ki dont get it either

so does she pick Duncan?

Or neither one of them?

I thougjt Violet was 15.

I thought Klaus was 13.

This is AWESOME, DUDE!1
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Hope you up-date!

Hope this is QUIGLET!

Oh, sweet... But don't you think some of the chapters are a bit short?

Is she gonna pick Duncan? This is good. Update!

Its pretty good. I like the way a simple problem makes the character of the chararcters change a lot. It is realy good so update as soonest as posible.

Your story is hilarious, its just what me and my cousins would do( if we werent cousins, of course)

They realy act like my 9 years old brother *_* :)

Im sorry to say that Duncans acts were similars to my 9 years old brother

Nice story! I love the drama between all of the siblings. Is Violet picking Duncan? I respect your pick, but I prefer Quigley. But, I'll still keep reading your story if you update it!

this was a tragic chpter, but I still liked it. Still I think more things should happen in your chapters.

I like it, but Id prefer your chapters longer, they are a bit short *_*but not shorter than mine*_*

Ooh, this is interesting. I'd advise you to put in a little more description and not as much dialogue, because that could tone down the melodrama a bit, but this is pretty good. Not entirely in-character, but quite close. So anyway, update soon!

Omigod!! u have to keep writing . I soo want to knoww. please it was so great. you really ahve to. I want o know what she tell duncan. it was soo good . writ e another chapter, quickly.

Very suspenseful!