Very funny. Loved it.

In reading SW slash for fourteen months, I've gone beyond collecting typos like "mediating in the Force," and "loosing Anakin to the Dark Side," to collecting parodies. This one is good enough to print out to take to the beach and giggle over. As is your Obidala one.

Anyway, this was hilarious! Excellent job. Wonderful parody. I love parodies. Drinks all 'round.

I love this.

I love the incomprehensable Yoda speak.
I love the sex scene, but you left out the bit about using the force instead of oil for... well, if you've read any fic in this fandom you'll know what I mean.

A++

This should be in a hall of fame. Brilliant! :D

LOL!LOL!!LOL!LOL!
ahahahahahahahahahahahahahaah!!#
*hyperventalates*
ahahahaahahahaahahaa!!
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Stop stop im dying...
hehehehehe
so...*gasp*...good..*gasp*...write...more
Somnia x

*ROTFL* Strong in the Force, this fic is! Very good! And, I must admit that I'm guilty of the last line... Keep up the good (and hilarious) work ^-~

LOL! That was funny as hell. You've captured the essence of the love story (slash or not) beautifully, and without all that "wilty, weepy, rejected" stuff ;)

That was the most hilarious thing I have ever read. I haven't read too many TPM stories, but anyone who's read more than two fanfics had to have been rolling! I sent a link to all my friends, we've been discussing fanfic cliches for weeks now and how it's been annoying the heck out of us (how one character gets turned into the "girl" is our pet peeve, one that you illistrated brilliantly.) Anyway, thanks, that was wonderful!

I think I hurt myself from laughing. This was absolutely HYSTERICAL!!!! I LOVED it!!

Good job on the parody. This fits the majority of slash I've read. It's great, and many of the reviews for it are amusing too.

*ROTFL* Oh Gods, I'm the world's biggest Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon slash addict, but this is priceless.... *g* "Think twice, you should, before more icky Jedi slash you read, hrmmmm...?" Shaddap, muppet boy.... *off to find more medication*

ROFLMAO! Funny as hell! Loved the confusion about Obi-Wan's color scheme! ^_^

that was so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!! you come up with such hilareus storys

God, is this funny!