heya! Spanish was actually quiet good.. a few errors... but nothing that really impeded the reading! very good! an need any translations, come ask... i realise i am like soo late on this rview but i awas reading the frst few that were ever published..came accros this and loved it all over again soo...

hah much love jodie (adorelo)

Hey! It's great I love the poems, both. There's a mistake in the "tú", because it's not "tú" is "tí", Indirect Object. Spanish is my first languaje because I'm spanish so forgive my English mistakes right here xxD

I repeat myself I LIKED IT SO MUCH!

Marina

I can't read Spanish. But the English was good! I liked it! It was awesome!

pagan-seijou

I could tell you were bored. I probably would have done the same thing, except mine would have been a story. But anyways good job. Not native to any Spanish speaking country but what I know from my class, it looks like you're pretty good at it.

Very lovely poem! I speak three languages, but Spanish isn't one of them so I can't help you there, but the English translation is beautiful!

Very nice. I know a little bit of Spanish (4 years from HS and college, but I still suck at it) Very nice work and extreme guts for taking this on.

I love it... El español es muy sencillo, pero es bien tambien. Español es mi segunda idioma tambien.

this story...uh poem...is fantastico!...Uh...is that actually Spanish? My language is French, so excusez moi, s'il vous plait! Anyway, it's super! (C'est super!) Are you going to continue this...as in making it a story? If not, it's still good.

Hi!
I'm Spanish, so I can tell you that it's correctly written (only a few little mistakes).
If you want help with Spanish, want me to correct anything... I'm more than willing to help.
besos