Hey! Agree! No way in the comics, cartoons and movies suggest Rin and Sessh are daugher-father! Contrary, Rin first declared her wishes for staying forever with Sessh. And people who knew them, from Jaken, Sessh's mother and even Sessh's enemies Naraku and his hired Shinnintai (Jakusu) knew how to exploit their unspoken relationship by kidnapping Rin repeatingly! Rin/Sessh are lovers. The way Rin reacted towards Sessh throughout the comics suggests she meant Sessh as her lover. In Fedual era, a woman usually marries and have children at 13-15.(I read real biographies about Feudal warlords-their mothers gave birth to them at this age range and their own wifes and concubines married them at such age range.) So Rin at 8-10, after following Sessh for years, she wasn't really a 'child' in her times! She was capable to know falling in love.

it needed the lemon. other then that it was very very good, to say the least.

"Sesshomaru growled, and flipped him the middle finger quickly as he had seen Inuyasha's wench do when insulted. He wasn't sure wat it meant, but he did know it wasn't nice to do. Before anyone could see that uncharacteristic display he went back into the shoji."
i loved that so funny so unlike him but so great! i just loved it

wow so cute...i like this sessy...lol so cute..oh bty good job

wow cute i think Haru mean spring...or was it Haru...sorry cant remeber..lol but im sure it means spring good bty

i liked it. nice tory.

Awe, cute ending...

VC

I liked it, I really did. Your chapters weren't as short as others I've seen, and I was glad for that. It's so annoying when people only write a couple of sentences on a page and call it a chapter...

BTW;
Sesshomaru has only 1 arm.
His RIGHT ARM.
As long as there are burns on his hand from the tetsuiga, there is only ONE ARM.
As long as there is a tetsuiga, there is only ONE ARM.

plx remember that.

SEQUEL !

awwl.. i like this story no matter what. its cute! :)

awsome fighting scene that so drumatic in a gud way

OMG sesshomaru gave...the...middle..finger...LOL LMFAO thats so funny lol

kisses all around. break out the misletoe lol

omg if I was rin I would die of abearessment(cant spell big words)lol