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OMFG 2008-09-08 . chapter 19
WRITE MOAR PLS
DragonGirl323 2008-04-15 . chapter 20
GAH! There must be more! THERE MUST BE!

Please please please please please OH PLEASE OH PLEASE update soon!

I've got to find out what else happens! It's been so long since I've read this...(back when it was only 19 chapters)and that was a while ago...but I read it all over again and it's still breathtakingly amazing! The both of you are so talented and I can't get enough of your awesome writing!

Please update soon! My sanity depends on it!

Sincerely,
DragonGirl323
SleekWulf 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
I haven't even read your story yet (which I'm planning on reviewing completely) but just hearing that you & a friend are working together on this by role-playing different characters really caught my eye. I actually am doing the same thing with other friends on writing stories together and it is the most interesting way to do, and personally I think the best stories will come of it and the characters will have more life to them. A Royal Blessing on you both for your upcoming work. (Formal Bow)
Kukuxumusuu 2007-11-01 . chapter 20
Please continue this fan fic. This is by far one of the best Vincent x Tifa fan fics that I have read, and it's impossible for both animenadie and you to end it here. I'm begging you to update!! *sobs*
Shiek927 2007-03-30 . chapter 10
Aw, come on! I know they're together now, but that doesn't mean the story should end yet! Especially on a cliffhanger like that one :(
Shiek927 2007-02-03 . chapter 20
Wow, I've finally read the beginning to end and it's AWESOME. Advent Children had me going "Aww, Well, Clouds stupid but we'll forgive him", but your story is "You know what?! Screw Cloud and his angsty **!". You even killed him off :P

The only issue I had was the switches from "Tifa" too "Vincent", it always feel abrupt. I got used too it eventually, but this is something that should be noticed, especially during the Lemon chapter(which, for all your warnings wasn't SO bad, compared too others :P) since it didn't sort of flow right.

But this story can't end here! Even now, the others still have tension around Vincent and their is still alot more that can happen!
tartar12345 2007-01-13 . chapter 20
I love Vincent here! Do hope this can get finished...
swantonforthemoment 2006-12-05 . chapter 20
i love this story and was just wondering if it was going to be continued or not?
TifaValentine99 2006-10-15 . chapter 20
NO! IT WAS GETTIN SO GOOD! UPDATE SOON!

TifaV.
DrunkDeadman 2006-10-05 . chapter 20
I'm begging you,continue please! This story rocks!
Like Weiss on Rice 2006-09-20 . chapter 1
I finally found this story again! I read it through once before and I never got to favorite it. I couldn't remember it's name for the life of me.

I really love how well this story is written. The roleplaying format confused me at first because (of course) I didn't read the author's notes like I should have! Hehe.

It's a very nice story - love it. Very slow and steady. The characters really get to interact with each other a lot and we get to see it all.

After I'm finished with my story I'll probably try to review each chapter because I like this one so much - but until then I wanted to favorite you and tell you how much I liked the fic.
Lady Shiva 2006-08-24 . chapter 20
I just caught on to this story, and I LOVE IT! It's an incredible piece of work. Please continue updating!
Viva-taquitos 2006-08-23 . chapter 16
This is the funniest/raunchiest/cutest chapter I've read in a long time. How could you guys combine the three? It reminds me of Avenue Q.
sasha 2006-08-21 . chapter 20
this is a really indepth look into two different people and boy does it sizzle when they get together, i love it! cloud was annoying but i think his reaction was believable, so RIP buddy. i've always liked the idea of vincent with tifa and i like the two different perspectives, it really keeps them IC in a way. keep it up girls!
Viva-taquitos 2006-08-15 . chapter 3
Well, there are several more chapters to be read, and I usually review the last one posted if I happen to read the story after it's been up a while, but I just can't keep my mouth shut.

First, the quality of writing. It's...well, fabulous. Not written so simply and childish that it tends to become annoying, or so advanced that it has one utterly frazzedly. It's perfect.

The pace of the story, so far, is quite enjoyable as well. At first, I became a little nervous has to how far thr page went down, but as I read further I noted how well it was. Not too fast, not too slow. As I said, very enjoyable.

Second, the characters. You two captured, I feel, two of the most difficult characters in FF7. They are as they should be written. Especially Vincent and his relationship with Marlene...perhaps out of character for him, but how he handles it, certainly not. In my opinion, anyway.

So now that I chewed you guys' ear off, I shall now read the rest of the story. Ta-ta!
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