 Anonymous Pokemon Fan 2008-05-29 . chapter 1 This is awesome. And yes, Misty is very tomboyish in the anime, so she's portrayed well in your fic. :) |
 always lost123 2007-07-23 . chapter 1WO i never read a football/pokemon story before COOL! XD update really soon! i really want to read more of this! |
 peonelopie4 2006-07-31 . chapter 1O this is going to be a intersting story! |
 Chat-Chan 2006-07-07 . chapter 1Hah, any store where the girl can kick ** is awesome. ^_^ Yay for original plots! |
 Danny-171984 2006-04-30 . chapter 1That was really interesting. Like how you started things. Rare to see a story starting with Misty point of view. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep on writing.
Danny |
 Scribblez 2006-04-30 . chapter 1This fic reminded me of a film called 'She's the man' I'm not to soon if you've see it.
Anyway, I love the intro and will keep an eye out for the next chap.
Keep going ^_* Great start. |
 Ash Eyes 2006-04-30 . chapter 1please continue! this is really good :) |
 dbzgtfan2004 2006-04-26 . chapter 1This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Ash and Misty forever. |
 Tohsaka-Rin91 2006-04-26 . chapter 1Well, I admit that I know next to nothing about football . . .
But I really do like this story so far. It shows some really great potential. I really loved how you fit Misty's character into the setting. It flows very nicely.
I usually just like reading fics about their journeys, but a story like this one is nice read every so often. Not to mention that lots of the stories that are posted nowadays . . .
Are well . . . Bad.
Haha xD
It's really nice to see you writing for Pokemon again :D
Tee Hee.
Update whenever you feel like it, which I hope is soon. :D |
 AshK 2006-04-26 . chapter 1I don't care what anybody else says, this is a great fic! Please update Soon!
Sincerely,
AshK |