That was awesome!
I coun't stop laughing, Hiikata was so freaked out.
I love it!

"Yamazaki had to grip his knees to prevent himself from grabbing his kunais and destroying every single living thing within two miles of him out of sheer fright." OMGs, LOL!

I had a feeling Souji was playing with Hijikata's head, but to nail Yamazaki the control freak too? Fan-tast-fic!

meehahahhaha (evil laugh) that was so funny, i love how okita was "innocently evil"

Very funny fic.. I love it so much!! Keep writing. You're born to do it.

... A smile is indeed deadly in Okita's case.

Still, it's nice.

Fab little fic, well done! Captured the charactrs very well, most humourous! ^_^

Hahahahahah! This was just such a charming little story! I could just see Souji's smile setting Hijikata on edge, lol! Souji's a little fiend. ^_^

Utterly hilarious. I feel sorry for poor Toshi. Muahahaha...

hehe, dat was funny, not bad 4 ur 1st pmk story.

oh, WOW! I can't even tell you how great this little story was! After Hijikata said, "Confess" I just lost it and giggled uncontrollably the rest of the way through! I can just picture how this would be illustrated in the manga, especially Hijikata's expressions. Souji's smile is like his secret superpower. There really is no limit to what he can do with it! I hope you write a lot more!

Nice! ^^

OH MY GOD! XD *dies of laughter*

I should really never try to read fics as funny as this in class XDD my teacher will behead me one of these days D:

Very nice job AHAHAHA XD I like it a lot.

That was so worth reading! I enjoyed it, and the prank idea was so good. You made it really nice to read. You go girl/boy!