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Nelyar 2008-10-08 . chapter 1
Please I need more chapters! This was such an incredible start. Please go on... I need more chapters.
ShadowWolfDagger 2008-09-08 . chapter 2
Awesome House story can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon ^_^
~Tala~
Chocochino11 2008-08-19 . chapter 2
this is an awesome story... please update soon!
JackShephard 2008-08-04 . chapter 2
Loved it. Are you going to continue? Eagerly awaiting the next update. :)
BeautifullybR0KeN 2008-07-14 . chapter 2
Oh wow poor Chase..you have superb writing skills! Please update!
Pinku Aisu Kuriimu 2008-04-06 . chapter 2
I looved this *_* please continue ç_ç' it's so good! I loved the sexual-abused-drugged-almost-dying-suffering chase 8DD please don't give up on this ç_ç
NaylaS2 2008-03-31 . chapter 2
Amazing story! You must continue! Please!
Update soon. I can´t wait to read what's happening next!
LishaChan 2008-02-10 . chapter 2
Wow I love it! Please update soon!
chiclete 2008-01-20 . chapter 2
Great story, please continue!
Romanse 2007-09-06 . chapter 2
This story is interesting and I hope you finish it. I want to know why Goldfarb attacked Chase and how well Chase will recover physically and emotionally from his attack.

I think your interpretation of House is solid.

I think you have the ability to tell a story, but my best recommendation to you would be to find someone who excells at writing House fic and ask them to read over your chapters before you post them. Someone to watch your back is good because they can help polish up things and work on those little details that move a story from the B+ range into the A range.

There were a few things that gave me pause, and this is just one: No medical person would Absolutely Conclude, BEFORE an exam, as you have your staff doing, that the patient had been sexually assaulted. Nudity isn't proof of sexual assault, it's an indicator.

Keep writing. Don't be afraid to appraoch other's for an alpha or beta read. I'm sure looking forward to the rest of the story...
Mrs.TomMarvaloRiddle 2007-08-11 . chapter 2
Nice beggining, waiting for more. I'm paitent. :)
nemo123489 2007-07-30 . chapter 2
goodjob update again soon please i hope Chase is okay
Anne 2007-07-20 . chapter 2
So far...great.
Please continue.
Radon65 2007-07-19 . chapter 2
Cool! So House is going to see Mrs. Goldfarb - I would love to
see that conversation! House is in good character and Cuddy was pretty decent. This is a very interesting story and your writing is good.
Radon65 2007-07-19 . chapter 1
Okay... That's kind of creepy. What a weird lady! Intriguing first chapter, I'd love to see more of House in on this. Chase's characterization was quite good, although I thought Cameron was a bit flippant and more impolite than usual. But this is good!
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