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funky-monkey-93 2007-08-21 . chapter 7
update soon!
hawaiiancostley 2006-08-10 . chapter 3
Percy Weasly can't be Minister of Magic! He doesn't deserve it. I also wouldn't put my wand in a holster, but still good, and I like the longer story.
Lily Hermione Potter 2006-07-27 . chapter 7
Hooray that was great!
alayneni 2006-05-06 . chapter 7
So what happens now?
alayneni 2006-05-06 . chapter 4
Now reading your story and just reached this chapter but I have s Quick question if they went back 19 year and Harry is 18, How is he alive in the past?
eternalstupor 2006-05-06 . chapter 7
Hello, once again! I enjoyed this chapter alot. The fight with the Dementor reminded me of a cliched wrestling match, which made me laugh. Even though I'm not a Harmony shipper, I really like this fanfic. Hope to read more soon :D

-Eternalstupor
eternalstupor 2006-05-06 . chapter 6
Hello, again! This chapter was very well written. However, I was somewhat confused about where the Dementors came from, but perhaps I missed something. Overall, I thouroughly enjoyed this chapter. Everything that James said seemed like something a loving father would- you could really tell his personality, which is quite hard to do in such a short amount of writing. Great job. Talk to you when I review your next chapter :D

-Eternalstupor
eternalstupor 2006-05-01 . chapter 5
This story is pretty good so far. Alot of details, which is great. And some very original ideas thrown in. One thing, though, is that in this last chapter, Harry wonders if he'll meet Ron on the train. But if you remember, Arthur, Molly, Lily and James were all members of the Order, so they would be friends, therefore Ron and Harry would most likely be friends. Other than that, though, there isn't much else wrong with this story. :D Great job. Hope to talk to you soon!

-Eternalstupor
PhoenixOwner 2006-05-01 . chapter 5
common! dont keep me in suspense! update soon!
Manori 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
Great chapter, cant wait to read more!
efbeans 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
excellent :p cant wait till next chapter...make it nice and long ;)
eternalstupor 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
Very well done. A few minor grammatical errors and sentence structure- but I'm a bit overparticular about that kind of stuff. Otherwise, I quite enjoy this story. I hope to read more soon! Fantastic work. Talk to you soon, I hope.

-Eternalstupor
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