oh my god, I totally cried. why. did. you. have. to. make. it. so. darn. SAD!! *bursts into tears*

That was...amazing.Sad and moving.I cried while reading this.You are an extremely talented writer.

That is so sad
But so good
I got tears in my eyes when I was reading that...you are a really good writer.
I love this story

i am drowning in my own tears. They are tears of sadness and of joy. this is by far one of my favorite fanfics. keep writing. gotta go dry my tears.

Wow...this story really brought tears to my eyes...and for the record that is a very hard thing to do but I cried all throughout and even laughed when Kit smiled...you have a great talent and I hope you continue to write. Dai Stiho' Cousin!

ah! damn u! grr, u made me cry!! thats not nice! i loved the story though. brought tears to my eyes, but whtever...

its so sad...i actually cried!but its so beautiful.LOVE IT!

Wow. Beautiful. Amazingly, awesomely beautiful! That was just...it was so...sad, yet...it ended happy, yet...wow! Wow, wow, wow, wow, WOW! This was incredible. I hope you know that, it really was. You are an amazing writer. The descriptions were just...fantastic, they really painted a picture, it was like I could see the whole thing playing in my head! At points it almost seemed like poetry, you could tell that you put a lot of work into every word and phrase, it was excellent! The scene on Mars was really well done, I could practically taste the battle! And you just fit so many concepts from the Young Wizards series in there--like the Kernal, the Preytons, the Silent Lord, et cetera--that made it realistic, like something from the actual books. It was so sad at first, but in the end it was...but it was still...I'm not going to go into this again! This pulled my heartstrings, it really did, this is just about the best fic I've ever read on this site! Bravo!

Wow that was good but it was also really sad too.

Wait, you're NOT Diane Duane? Goodness gracious, had me fooled! Hehe. Seriously, though, this sounds just like you took a few pages from the next book and slapped 'em onto fanfiction. Great job.

*squeals* AW! SUPER KAWAIINESS!

Kimiru: ...Gag me...

Me: *hits* SHADDAP!

really nice and kinda sad but it is sweet and wicked awsome
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One word: Bravo.