 silverymoonfire 2007-10-06 . chapter 2haha nice
great story by the way please update soon |
 mango-passion 2007-07-26 . chapter 2I love this! Its a great idea and cant wait to see more! |
 AGENT KUMA-CHAN 2007-07-17 . chapter 2*gasp* naruto, you perv!! I guess you and the wanted poster artist are going to die together...such nightmares that Sakura has to endure, i am surprised she can sleep. continue soon! |
 Naniwoiutennen 2007-04-04 . chapter 2Amusing. Truly Amusing. I dont know quite what to think about this as a whole. I just know that I really cant wait to see what will happen next. I dont suppose that I have anything of major importance to say. I'm not really sure what I should feel. Guess I can say I loved it... because maybe I did, and I'm just a bit put-out that its left at something of a cliff hanger.. well not precisely a cliff hanger but still... I'm literally on the edge of my seat, but I still truly dont know how to feel about this. Then again, maybe I'm contradicting myself. I dont think that fact matters though, and I am positive that I do infact love where this is going as well as how it began. I cant wait to see what happens next. |
 XxHunter The One and OnlyxX 2006-06-30 . chapter 2HAHAHHA thats funny CONTINUE THIS STORY RULES! |
 Manori 2006-05-02 . chapter 2Cool, awesome chapter. Great job |
 Zorione 2006-04-26 . chapter 1This is nice but It knida makes me think of V is For Vendetta! |
 Skogstroll 2006-04-26 . chapter 1 Bwahahahaha
ok, this story sounds funny, and promising
Im cheering for ya
one thing though;
why are they worth more DEAD then ALIVE? I mean, isnt it easier to kill 'em then keep 'em kicking? So, basically, you either;
1; take away the "we want them alive"- thing at all, since no one would go for it anyways, or you...
2; twist it so that you get a bigger reward for bringing them in alive then dead
I love it when people bring in original sounding fanfics like this, its so nice when you dont need to read the same old story over and over again ^^ |
 Manori 2006-04-26 . chapter 1Great chapter, cant wait to read more! |
 chie 2006-04-26 . chapter 1 ^^ that was so cute~ wahh update soon please
although please fill in the details of the kidnapping... it doesn't really make sense... -.- |
 XxSad LoverxX 2006-04-26 . chapter 1It looks interesting^^
I really like it^^
UDATE SOON!!
*Bye* |