That was great. Hooray!

...Oh merry coincidence that I'm listening to a song I connect to YW while I'm reading this... YAY NITA/KIT BOOYA!

The one thing I sort of dislike the the uber-description of eyes, but I'll let it pass; I'm young and can't assume to understand the intricate workings of love. *snerk* Now, is there something like this for Roshaun and the ever-lovely in green Dairine?

That's cute. I love Tom and Carl. Thy're my favorite characters in this whole series.

Great story! Thanks so much for writing this! God bless!

these are the kind of stories when i think that maybe diane duane is disguised as a fanfiction writer because my god that was good.
i wish i could write description and emotions as well as you do.
i FELT it and since that's the whole point of writing (to make readers deel) i'd say you got a 10/10 perfect score.

AH I LOVE IT. its adorable and so them. love love lvoe it. you have a way with the descriptions

So romantic,so sweet,so...amazing!

Really good!

The title is so pretty, and the story is just so detailed! I love it.

:) i really like this...the bit at the end with Nita and Kit knowing that there were there was priceless :D i like how u described everything...really well written

Cute, humorous, vivid, I really never could write a fanfic like THAT.

I really liked this story! u were great!

Aw...That was an adorable peice of K/N...I loved it!

DARRA

*claps* Great!

I really like the story. it was great. Good job.