 ImperialGuardian09 2006-11-26 . chapter 18Lol... that's all I can say. It's such a cute, abrupt ending to the story... but that's okay... we'd been left on such a cliffhanger... but this has been one of the more, interesting stories I've read on the web, and I'm glad I picked it up when I did. 10/10... anywho, awesome story, and I'll check out more later... when my mailbox is empty...hehe... later! |
 Ashen Rose 2006-06-15 . chapter 17Kyah!
Oh god, Akane's going to go...no, not mad-mad... more like, 'Blood-thirsty-killing-crazy-scare-the-Gaara-till-they-all-cry-like-babies' mad.
What did happen? Did Aki do something when he first transported them, so that they've been there the entire time that Akane and co. were in the alchemist world, or was it something that happened when they tried to get on their way back? What happened?
Is Kabuto there? Or any of the other special minions of note like Diedara or the bone-guy there as well?
What's going to happen to Oreo? (Orochimaru, it kinda looks like oreo...) If ya ask me, he's a double-stuffed one too, because he's so full of himself! -snicker- someone needs to whack him down to size...Sora, Hinode, will you brin the hammer and the sharp kitchen shears? Wait, bring the dull rusty ones!
Now, what are Sora and Hinode going to do? It's gotta be SOME kind of overdrive function kicking in, with all of them there at once like they are. And it's hard to believe that no one else recognized any of the anime charas, and didn't folloe their trail to Akane's home (Well, Suo's, but she still lives there).
And finally, Who's going to save them from Aki? (Akane loves her little nephew, and i fear for the safety of any anime chara that the cute little guy starts toddling towards!
Now, cause i like too...
...ahem...
Remote malfunctions of the worst degree,
Bring in the whole faculty,
two more worlds to add to the mix,
in this brand new, awesome plost twist!
But seriously, Oreo-coo (Don't even ask about the coo) needs to have something horrendus happen to him(oh crap, what if he had a completely obsessed fan-club, and he went crazy himself after seeing their revised versions of his 'uniqueness'?). I don't think anyone else would mind if the bad guy was used to help Akane relieve her stress and pent-up rage against the anime-charas.
Great story! Update soon!
Bye! |
 ImperialGuardian09 2006-06-15 . chapter 17Poor, poor Akane... yes! They're back they're back! (the G-boys I mean)...hehe, why is Naruto staring at me like that? o.O
That is so fun and awesome and great and yeah...I'm at a jumble for words to describe this revelation... you know what? It was so funny though, that I am in this state...lol... awesome chapter Shinigami! Later! |