 Noble Voyager 10/23/11 . chapter 1It's been a while since I got caught up with some well-written fics. I have to say, I liked this story. Normally, people would always focus on writing about the main characters in the series wherein they have the spotlight all the time but reading a story about one of the series' "neglected" characters, for the lack of a better word, is really worthwhile. You nailed it! I loved the choice of words you used. It just made the emotions come to life and the way you protrayed Izumi's character. It was good. I like it. :) |
 Secret Symphony 7/23/09 . chapter 1This was incredibly, surprisingly touching. I teared up. :o Oh my, you are a good writer, even back in 2006. Poor Izumi. You are very insightful. It's nice having Ed and Al's teacher written so very humanly.
Great job! |
 InuyashaLuver1224 8/19/08 . chapter 1I love this. I really love this. You may not like it, but I find it delightful. Nice work! |
 Anorak Myth 2/21/08 . chapter 1I love it. Izumi's awesome. And you kept her completely in character. It was sad but hopeful at the same time. The ending was absolutely beautiful. "And from the ashes, the phoenix would rise again." Amazing. *favs* |
 agrajagthetesty 4/4/07 . chapter 1I really liked it. I think that you managed to fit in a lot of detail and emotional description, despite the word limit. Really good! |
 ShayWhat 7/8/06 . chapter 1Heh, he may not have been sick/dying/in PAAIN but we all know what HAPPENS on the island...so uh...it's almost the same! Sorta...yea... |
 Rurutchan 6/19/06 . chapter 1Wow! This is beautiful. No, I mean it. :D I never really thought about the Elric brothers' relationship with Izumi that way... at least, not in that depth. "And it was hard for her to hear the quiet, underlying 'mother' even when they were all but shouting 'sensei.'" - this part hit a sweet spot. I think I almost cried.
Thank you for gracing us with your fantabulastic writing. :3 |
 rockpaperscissor 5/8/06 . chapter 1Izumi usually doesn't get enough credit, but I think you did her justice. |
 Aemilia Rose 4/26/06 . chapter 1How coincidental... I just finished watching the episode where wee!Ed and wee!Al ask Izumi to be their teacher. Great timing!
As always, wonderful writing. Poor Izumi.
Good luck on your AP Test! Those things can be a pain. I took an English one last year (and am going to be taking another one next week), but I've heard the history ones are killers. I hope you do well! |
 silver sliver 4/26/06 . chapter 1wow... THAT WAS SO AWESOME! OMG! Just HAD to read it, great summary too! you really got... er, *sratches head..* er, I don't know how to spell her name... but, anyway...YOU SO GOT POV, honestly, love it.
Don't tell me this is one shot? |
 Child of a Pineapple 4/26/06 . chapter 1Well, I liked that. A lot. I haven't read many Izumi fics, so this was a nice change.
Ooh...AP tests are killer. I'm taking the Language and Composition test on Monday-I took the AP US History class, but I'm not taking the test...I'm terrible at history.
But yeah, we've been taking a bizillion practice test for L&C...I keep snagging 3's, and got a 4 once. The multiple choice questions are just uber hard...but I've been doing better...so, I'm totally hoping for a three. Too bad it's on a Monday...at 7:30 in the morning, right at the start of school. Bleh...
Anyway, great job on this fic, and good luck on your test! |