This is a nice little story. I like the part part where Arashi/Minato saves Jiraiya from Tsunade's wrath. The shadow behind Minato was a good idea.

Well, I actually like this . Like father like son ne?

Interesting isightfulness, woah two big words, anyways good job, another fan of the ,Naruto is the son of yondaime, theory!

The best part I liked about this, is where you gave us an example (through flashback) of how the Yondaime was as a child, and his change into a shinobi in the rock/Leaf war. This brought the image of the older Fourth, calm and confident, while he had his gennin team under his tutelege, and I never understood why Tsuande said he was like Naruto, except this little extract kinda tackles that gap. I know its just a way to fill in gaps. But I always like reading what (creative) authors have to say about all the gaps that Kishimoto provides us with.
Other than that, it was a nice piece.

a bit weird it might have been, but I LOVED it. XDD I can picture the yondaime saying that.

Nice one-shot. I enjoy your other story too. Hopefully Kishimoto-san will provide us with more background on Yondaime and the other, older characters.

wow. well, that certainly WAS unique. i actaully really enjoyed this! i did a bit of google and episode-watching research.. it turns out i really do believe now that the forth is naruto's dad.. a bit creepy, huh? i definatley read his name on that contract. AH!

~heather

You go Arashi!! I love it!