Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I look forward to reading more! I like this Natty girl, and this Octavius doesn't sound so bad when he's not trying to eat Proctor! I really like this story!

Wonderful chapter! You rock! I hope Proctor will be okay! I really like this story!

I really enjoyed it! I hope they figure it all out and Payton and Frankie are out of their lives! Great story!

Way to go Proctor! I really enjoyed that! "White Fang" is an amazing book, as is "The Call of the Wild", have you read it? It's also by Jack London. I really like this story!

Very cute ending! I'm glad that Proctor's okay! Great chapter!

Perfect! I love Proctor's attempts to get his "Mommy" and "Daddy" together! Very cute! I really enjoyed it!

Adorable! Absolutely adorable! I really enjoyed it! I love how he reacted to Frankie! Perfect!

I love it! Absolutely love it! Proctor is amazing! I love how he acted differently toward Mac and Frankie! Very cute with the way he seems to be communicating with them! Perfect!

hey :) Would you consider continuing this story?
I love dogs as well, and I love SMACked, hence I like this story^^

Just read all of this, I'm not much of a doggie fan but I am a Smacked fan and I really like how you write tmek. I loved the bit where Procyor (cool name btw, always makes me think of a play we studied in Enlish), wrapped them up in his lead. Glad to hear there will be more.

I really enjoyed reading this; I love dogs (as well as cats) and it was lovely and unexpected the little interlude as the dogs communicate with each other, very poignant. I also love how you portray Mac and Stella in this with their concern for each other, and for the dogs, their characters come over beautifully. Mac too with his generosity and practicality, and how he speaks to Proctor. I'm really looking forward to see where this goes next :)

Nice!! I can't wait for more!! :D

I really like the way you wrote the fight between the dogs, it was realistic and brillant insight into a dog's mind. I love the cute Mc and Stella sene you had going on.

Great story! Been following it for a while but I only just realized I'd never left a review... Opsie... :)

I love everything about it! Proctor attacking Frankie is definitely my favourite part, but Stella and Mac going out together, Mac rewarding Proctor for jumping Frankie and Proctor trying to get them together are all great scenes too. ;)

I have White Fang and Call of the Wild, but I've never really taken the time to read either... *blush* But I'm very curious about your other story and will most certainly be checking it out soon! And I'm looking forward to your next update, whenever you can manage it! Kudos. *

I loved this chapter:)
hope more is coming soon:)