Wow!
I like your story very much. You have a great style and your story flows wonderfully.
I'm glad you updated.
Please, try to updated again very soon.

Great chapter.
It was wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Update soon!

This is a fantastic story so far!! I'm eagerly awaiting the chance to read more.

can't wait to see what happens

I liked this chapter. C'est tres bien!

More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More Please
Great Job
Indi

Who can resist the cheesy grin? Anyway I like the story it isn't getting boring just yet. Jst when you think its going to go one way it switches to a whole new direction. That's what I like about it.

this story is really good, i can't wait to see what happens

wow, an update!
great job
Indi

Intense! :D
awesome for more!

have i ever mentioned how much i love this story... well, you don't know me anyway, so... I LOVE IT! keep up the good work!

this story is amazing, i really can't wait to see what happens!

AMAZING
How dare rorek imply that raven can't take care of herself.
Great chapter
Indi

Sorry I probably haven't reviewe din a while. I've been in a rush lately and hardly reviewd any1. I feel really bad about it. But I wonder what the hair is going to be used for. Hm..

Who is it?
please tell me
great job with this story
update soon please