 doragon 2006-05-02 . chapter 1 acording to what ive heard,(which might be wrong),gaaras mother doesnt hate him,she hates the village and people who sealed shukaku in him and cursed the village hoping that gaara would come to take revenge on the village.your storys good so far |
 Lulu C. T 2006-04-27 . chapter 1XD gah! your wording is beauitful. |
 o-dragon 2006-04-26 . chapter 1I thought it was really good. And I think that Gaara really does feel that as well...mostly why I keep writing him with a friend or someone in my fics. I just feel so sorry for him, I mean who wouldn't? He's so cute and sad and pitiful, *cry*. Anyway, great fic. I noticed you spelt "breath" wrong. It's "breathe".
Keep writing,
~Olivia |
 Bella Shia 2006-04-26 . chapter 1awr, I LOVE YOU Gaara-san. -shifty eyes- and I'm sure you'll want to kill me for that one. BUTIT'STRUE.
@_@ so dramatic...but that's hot. You do drama good Kuwo. 's all emo like that. No seriously, though, good job. Keep it up. |
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