Awesome story! I love it! poor little fayt thinking he actually had a choice

-goes into jibbering hysterics- You wrote this one too?! I read this one in our school library... that's my excuse for not faveing or reviewing... but this one has been one of my favorites ever since I read it! Gez... and now I know it's by you... I feel so special to have been reviewed by you... -sniffle- I'd like to thank the ac- err...

Wait! I remember something! I dedicated a pic on DA to you!

Heh. What I liked the most about this is that is EXACTLY how Albel would 'confess' to Fayt. Very in character. Heheh. It was good.

Interesting. ^^ Albel is quite the possessive type.

A few things...
sometimes your writing could do with a going-over - a few lines were rather unclear, like,

"Fayt was that person- Albel felt he was the one who liked Fayt but that because of those who hated him he had to stay away."

I read it three times and was confused. Partly this is the lack of commas, partly the misplaced modifier - giving things a second and third reading catches things like that.

Albel seemed very forward, confessing like that! I might suggest that he hold back a bit and leave some more to implication, seeing as he isn't usually one to let everyone know what he's feeling.

Finally, I loved the last line - though I must say that considering the last bits come off as quite the double-entendre - Albel's 'long sword'.

Or maybe I'm just a pervert. ^^

So cool! I absolutely love AlbelxFayt and the idea of ownership. Fayt so totally belongs to Albel!

I read your profile; you're from England too? Wow! Everyone seems to be from America so it's nice to meet someone local.

Hope you write more AlbelxFayt; they deserve more fics!

Oh my god..

*explode* THAT WAS SO SWEET!!

*Giggles insanely* Hee hee, what a lovely fic to start off my morning! :D *Ignores her essay due in a few days in favour of fangirling* XD I love how you've chosen to base a fic upon that gift box picture, which was one of the earliest pieces of Japanese AlbelxFayt fanart I came across and is one of my all time favs! ^_^ Though many a night I wondered what was inside that box... ;) Thank you for sharing your own spin on what's inside, and I swooned very happily at the necklace description. XD (My initial guess though was that it was a ring, however that would probably be WAY too soon. XD) On top of all that this was a very well written fic with lots of thoughtful musings. ^^ Oh and here are my fav lines:

"Even though I may hurt you- you don’t mind that- you understand me." - Couldn't have said it better myself. XD I've always stuck to my guns that this is one of the most important justifications for the AlbelxFayt pairing, and which not many of the other popular SO3 pairings can boast. :3

"“So…where are we going?” Fayt asked- bedroom, bedroom, bedroom-" - LOL. XD XD

Great work, I loved this! :D