Aaw such a cute story! I'm gonna go look at you DA profile now and add you as friend! My username is NaitoNekura...YAY ZATR!

Haha, the actual insane Irken is very insightful XP

Hehe, random how Tak stole the pizza...Can't wait to read how Pleecy and Zim met each other...

Aah so its uncertain if Red and Pleecy are actually siblings? Interesting. Joon's awesome; pretty sneaky sending Pleecy over there to test Zim and Tak's relationship. Lol in the previous chapter, when Zim asked Tak why she didn't have jelly, I thought he meant fat XD (Referring to the fat-bikini-lady...)

HAHAHAHAHA! NAKED! Wait...Was it naked Irken or Human? By the way, how are they able to swim in water? Aren't Irkens hypo allergic to water? Funny chapter though; lol fat-bikini-lady...

Lol, zim self-destructing...He almost did that in the first episode didn't he? It's a good twist that Pleecy's Red's sister...Ever wonder why the Tallest are so skinny? I do; often.

Lol Zim gets glomped by what would seem to be, someone who's in love with him XD

"I Miss You (Blink 182)"
I miss you
I miss you

Hello there
The angel from my nightmare
The shadow in the background of the morgue
The unsuspecting victim
Of darkness in the valley
We can live like Jack and Sally if we want
Were you can always find me
And we'll have Halloween on Christmas
And in the night we'll wish this never ends
We'll wish this never ends

I miss you
I miss you

I miss you
I miss you

Where are you
And Im so sorry
I cannot sleep
I cannot drink tonight
I need somebody and always
This sick strange darkness
Comes creeping on
So haunting every time
And as I stared I counted
The webs from all the spiders
Catching things and eating their insides
Like indecision to call you
And hear your voice of treason
Will you come home and stop this pain tonight
Stop this pain tonight

Don't waste your time on me
Your already the voice inside my head
[I miss you I miss you]
Dont waste your time on me
Your already the voice inside my head
[I miss you I miss you]


Don't waste your time on me
Your already the voice inside my head
[I miss you I miss you]
Don't waste your time on me
Your already the voice inside my head
[I miss you I miss you]
Don't waste your time on me
Your already the voice inside my head
[I miss you I miss you]
Don't waste your time on me
Your already the voice inside my head
[I miss you I miss you]

I miss you
I miss you


I miss you
I miss you


I miss you
I miss you

Aw! I loved it!

Tres

LOVELY story. i am not sure which one is better!

:)

Good luck with your trilogy if you are still writing it!

I tell you, my favorite part of this fanfic was the ending. I'll let you decide if that's a good thing or not... just kidding of course. Well, about not telling you, anyway. I, in perfect truth, loved this ending. But the rest was awsome, too.
I rarely see ZATR this smooth. But whilst I'm being honest, I haven't read to much ZATR, really... oh, but there I do go again. Great work. (Oh, yeah, Doc. Smooth as always.)

You know ever since I wrote my fanfic I've noticed a huge increase in ppl writing ZATR stories involving Irken's at war...hm. Story was good by the way.

aww im sorry bout your nana i guess i am going to be sad and emo tommorow at school... oh, well, great story.

omygosh you are friggn' wierd for making this girl so retarded. but i lurve your story!
yes.

*more applause* Another great job! Pleecy is so funny. She and my chara Taek would probably get along nicely...they're both ditzy annoying defective valleygirls XD lol.