Pretty reflexive. Good!

Aggressive, yet sweet. Awesome. I hope you make some Tess poetry! :) :) :)

*wipes tear* AW! i love the "broken but still strong" poem it's really great!

dudette, the second chapter was better. you inspired me to write a poem, thanks man

not bad, not bad, I personally would have added just a little more detail, but could just be me lol, also, you didn't have to split the poems, you could have kept them together and made the poem "grow" as it went on.

Please keep up the good work, you're a wonderful writer!

Shadow Systems

Zuko: I don't like it.
Me: I think she has gotten the point by now, Zuko.
Zuko: Still, I don't like it, even though this Jak guy sounds a lot like me. HE WILL ENVER GET HIS FLITHY EVIL HANDS ON MY BELOVED KATARA!
Me: *throws ZUko into a closet* I LOVE THEM.
TC: That's a first for soemthing not Avatar related.
Me: Hey, isn't a dragoness entitled to liking other things besides Avatar?
Zuko: *pounding on the door* NO! NOW, LET ME OUT DJ! DJ! DJ ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME! LET ME OUT NOW!

Dragon Jadefire

Zuuko: WHAT! THIS ISN"T ABOUT ME! WHAT TYPE OF PERSON ARE YOU DRZYM!?
Me: Calm down Zuzu, if you read, this is a Jak II poem its a video game. Great job RS!
Zuko: RS? What's tyhat?
Me: Rebel Shadowknight!
Zuko: I didn't like the poem.
Me: I did! And besides you never like anything that doesn't have to do with you and Katara getting together and haveing four kids.
Zuko: NOT TRUE! I like lots of stories that don't have me and Katara getting together.
Me: Oh,yeah...name one, mister smarty pants!
Zuko: um...um...I can't think of any right now.
Me: KNEW IT!
Zuko: OH! I know, the Story here I meet this Seto Kaiba!
Kaiba: I don't have green hair!
Joey: Hi, Kaiba's DOG.
Me: Great poem Reb!
Zuko: I DON'T LIKE IT!
Me: Ignore Zuzu.