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IamThePasserby 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abusefan friggin tastic.
Taiven 2008-01-31 ch 1,	abuseLoved it!
Rat 2008-01-11 ch 1,	abuseExcellent writing, and heart wrenching angst. Great read.
JazzyIrish 2007-12-17 ch 1,	abuseWhat a fabulous one-shot. This is the first time I've read your work and I'm really impressed. I just love your crisp style; the way you mix-up the scenes so that the complete picture only comes together at the end. Like a jigsaw puzzle. At the beginning, I thought to myself - Sam in bed with a girl - well, that's different. (never read AN at the beginning - don't want to spoil the surprises) And then we see how he came to being there. I've got to tell you, the "blue line" memories broke my heart. It's never too late to feel Sam's pain at losing Jess. Let's face it, even Dean knows that the ONS are a poor substitute for the real thing - as your last line drives home. You write the boys so well, so spot on. Dean is hard, dangerous, angry...and tender when it comes to kids. Sam is moody, emotional, sad...and dangerous to himself. And apparently to Dean too - can't believe he decked him. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. "Fire in the Hole" was recommended, so I thought I'd start with this one-shot. So glad I did. Thanks for sharing this with us. Until next time...
Tari Roo 2007-10-09 ch 1,	abuseFrigging tears in my eyes!! Actually choked up... Damn, this was good - I mean really good in that heart-going-all-gooey-way that makes me feel like a sap and then some. Bloody brilliant!
PookbearD 2007-09-06 ch 1,	abuseThis was beautifully tragic. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and can't wait to read more of your stories. You have a great way of weaving POV's, details, and emotions, that pack one heck of a punch to your reader. This story makes you want to hug and kick the boys at the same time. So angsty. Loved it. Definitely one of my top favorites!
pringle.sam 2007-07-31 ch 1,	abuseIt will be good to get the funny and the happy back. This was good, but I like happy Winchesters so much more :(
Supernoodle 2007-07-21 ch 1,	abuseAgain... That was so, so good. How angsty can you get without wanting to slit your wrists? lol You are such a good writer. I just love the way you write these boys... They are so full of hurt and you show us brilliantly. More please! x
ohmygodnotthecar 2007-05-13 ch 1,	abuseWow. Just - wow. You are one hell of a writer. I'm adding you to my favourite authors.
Constance Eilonwy 2007-02-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is fantastic. The way you alternated their pov, the structure, the way you use these sharp details. You kind of ripped my heart out a little with this, strong and poignant.
Rebel Goddess 2007-01-14 ch 1,	abuseLoved Dean's desire to have something to throw sharp things at. Also loved the way Dean (and this is so absolutely true) cares about family past more than family future. The kids in the ocean were heartbreaking. Gorgeously sad. More please.
Azure 2006-07-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh my GOD this hurts. The pregnancy test and Sam teaching himself to make chocolate cake and Dean's pain over the children and everything. It hurts, but it's beautifully executed and written, and you've painted this incredibly bleak picture all the way through. I love that, although they love and understand each other, their communication is still totally messed up, because it IS, and they don't always get what's going on. I found this via the Lawrence Awards, btw, and best of luck with that!
Liz Bach 2006-07-21 ch 1,	abuseWow.
EagleGirl6 2006-06-25 ch 1,	abuseWow, poor Sam, he's lucky to have Dean.. such a good brother, in his loud but loving way. Great story:)
irismay42 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseHah, found one I'd not read, thanks to the Fan Fiction awards on - contratulations! This one certainly deserved it! Once again, a perfect Dean matched by a perfect Sam...

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