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Spinereader 2006-05-01 . chapter 1
A very dark but realistic take on teacher/student relationships. It didn't glamourize it, nor did it demonize either of the parties, which was nice. You portayed the teacher sympathetically, yet you didn't to the extent that he appeared blameless. Unfortunately you had frequent tense changes which marred it a little, but otherwise it was just perfect.
living-is-easy-with-eyes-closed 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
I liked your story, it was really good.
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