I was crying by the end of this. It's so beautifully written.

A great story. Very good.

This is beautifully written. Thanks.

That is a really good one! Its about the only Kate's death one that's made me choked up! I liked it a lot. :)

This is just... wow. I hate post-twilight stories, but this was absolutely amazing. Beautiful. Simply beautiful. *tear*

wow.
this is beautiful.
wow.

Eloquently beautiful. Simply, eloquently, heart-wrenchingly beautiful.

A gem among stones.

Wonderfully done, perfectly written...

hey awesome story, brought tears to my eyes. it was soo sad yet soo cool, its just amazing. totally loved it

'Gibbs doesn't hug McGee, not quite, but gently places his hand on the back of McGee's head, and after a moment, McGee's uncertainty curls itself away with the wind.'

The last six words in this sentence took my breath away. As did the rest of this story. It's the best Twilight AU I've read and the language is simply beautiful.

Wonderful job.