Good work on this update! Keep on Keepin' on!

better late then never eh? well just improve on the grammer and its fine

bervo poygone-haes-a-book-keeper-it,s-man

bervo-i want-more-of-crover-palse
mabey-you-cood do -sailormoon-meets-kimposslibe-hm

WAH!! O_o this is the first Zatch Bell/Sailor Moon x-over I've seen! :) right now I'm lovin' it! heh heh... surprise surprise!! Ami and Suzy are related? that a little bit unexpected wouldn't you say? I mean Ami and Suzy's peresonalities are like total opposites of each other. Suzy is cheerful and somewhat clueless and Ami is smart, smarter than Kiyo even! >_< funny! now Iwashima is calling Ami an alien just because she related to Suzy. yes, yes indeed Kane, it is a sign of the apocalypse. *laughs* Serenity and Yumi they're a bunch of interesting characters. Serenity wants to use Usagi and her scouts in order to win the Mamodo Battle. but how exactly does that suit their purpose just by using them? it seems like Serenity just doesn't want to do any of the hard work herself in anihalating other mamodos. how exactly is Yumi involved this? I mean beside just being Serenity's book holder? how exactly did Yumi manage to live for a thousand years?! I mean she human... isn't she? Goren... Goren... Goren... who is he exactly. it seems that Serenity doesn't want to run into or meet him any time. Goren seems to stike fear in Serenity. well, update soon!!

p.s.
sorry if I asked too many questions! :P

i like this story! don't stop keep going!

will the zatch bell chrecters have a past life too?

cool

bervobervobervo why-have,t tia&maegume-tuned-up-yeat
just-keep-e.m-comeing

Um thats cool keep going I want to read more