 Ironbear 2008-09-18 . chapter 8Arrgh. A cliffhanger! ;)
Good story so far. It really needs to be finished some day. I have to agree with the other reviewer: Xander and Veronica aren't a couple I would normally think of, but they seem to work well together in this crossover. |
 vmarslovahhh18 2008-07-26 . chapter 8i really wish there was more to this story because it is simply amazing!
i had never thought of xander/veronica but i absolutely love it.
although i do feel bad for logan. oh well.
i liked the little bit with trina, she's a character.
but this story rocked. i'm glad you wrote it. |
 Sean Malloy-1 2006-10-16 . chapter 8Nice to see another part or the fic posted, please do your best to add more chapters when you have the time |
 enchantedlight 2006-10-16 . chapter 8great chapter! update soon! |
 warren 2006-10-16 . chapter 8 good story looking forward to your next chapter. |
 enchantedlight 2006-08-03 . chapter 7great chapter! update soon! |
 war 2006-08-03 . chapter 7 good story looking forward to your next chapter. |
 Sean Malloy-1 2006-08-02 . chapter 7Great work on these chapters, please try to post your next part as soon as you are able to |
 LoserPower101 2006-06-28 . chapter 5 I think that Kendall probably had money it the suitcase, I mean look in between the lines. Oh, and if you're gonna add Kendall, what is it do to Xander, or is this gonna be like so double identity with Cordelia? |
 enchantedlight 2006-06-19 . chapter 6great chapter! update soon! |
 RavynJensen 2006-06-18 . chapter 6I know I've been begging for you to write the Logan-finds-out scene, but ... ouch!
Poor Logan, the things V said to him were horrible, the worst thing she could ever do is compare him in any way to his father. Even Xander thought she was harsh, at least he made sure that someone would be with him to make sure Logan didn't do anything drastic.
Okay, still interested in the story, but ... ouch. |
 war90 2006-06-18 . chapter 6I like the Xander/Veronica connection they seem happy together and thats something Veronica needs.that was a harsh conversation between Veronica and Logan.btw are going to continue the unfortunate Don ? good story looking forward to your next chapter. |
 wordoftruthhunter26 2006-05-30 . chapter 5I do like this story alot. Your characterizations were a little off but everyone sees people differently. please keep writing. I also agree that Warrior God would have made a better wording for the prophecy. Would have loved to see Veronica as a god would have been so great. keep up the great work. |
 Krystal 2006-05-30 . chapter 5 I like this story but it bugs me that Veronicas character is so weak. On VM shes this kick ** supperchick but in the Buffyverse shes overshadowed. Try bringing the story into the VMverse a little. I can't wait for the Xander Logan confrontation. Therers no way Xander could like him because of his great love for Veronica and eerie resemblance in personality to Spike. |
 Dr. Shubert 2006-05-29 . chapter 5"And a great darkness will fall upon the earth and the skies above and the caves below while the turned Warrior of the Gods extinguishes all that is good and worthy and worships her enemies." First thing I thought of when I read this prophecy was turn "Warrior of the Gods" to "Warrior God" and you get ... Mars. Veronica (or maybe her dad) better watch out. ;) |