great ff

This is a great story I love it

great start! on to ch 2...

truly beautifully hot!

Whoa-that was good!

I didn't see how fast Gris was willing to move-but it worked.
Thanks for not dragging this out-good story!

Very cute story. I loved the end of the second chapter especially, the lemons and the limo ;)

That's good-I like how Grissom finally told Sara how
he felt-and she let him know it wasn't too late! Very
sweet!

Thanks for continuing this! Now what?:)

great update, can't wait for more!

wow, love the dirty talk, lol... totally amazing plot! really cool way of saying everything that needs to be said between these two, and in one chapter! wow, talk about challenge. you did great.

ok with that said, can i please have another chapter, or a sequel... pretty please :P

Oo smut next? :D

I swear I reviewed chapter 1 but it's telling me I didn't :( Great job!

omg love the story!

Oh that's good-very IC for both Sara and Gris!

Sara's fear at Gris's reaction-then his telling her he
needed a chance-very believable!

Great beginning-thanks! Now what?:)

i like it, really interesting story... different from what i've read, i'll be expecting your update... :)