Hn. That was very sweet and fluffy, but also a teensy, teensy bit hard to follow. For example, the sentences are a tad bit too long, and Hinata doesn't really stutter 10 times in one sentence; on the contrary, she stutters from 2-3 times every three sentences.

There were also a few spelling errors. You used "witch" instead of "which." Witch means the magical witch, as in The Wicked Witch of the West from the movie "The Wonderful Wizard of Oz." Which would be the proper gramatical term.

Besides that, good job. You were a little off from the character's personality (Rock Lee doesn't use the word "youth" /that/ much ... ), but also very cute. It made me feel warm inside at the ending, when he hugged Hinata and she hugged him back.

I hope to see more from you in the future!

dat wuz cute. Hinalee? or leesaku? still cool though!

(squeals) EEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEEHEE~! THAT WAS FANTASTIC~!! Very in-character, and VERY waffy, JUST the way me likes it. ^.^ Great ficcy, keep writing (more HinaLee?)! ^.^

Is this a HinaLee fic? I'm confused at the moment. Mabey it is a HinaLee friendship fic? Well if it is then you should make a sequel. One where they try to help each other out with their love problems. Of course that's just my opinion.